Once upon a time there was a house in America with two dogs and a family. The doors open and you will be downstairs. There is grass growing in the backyard and pigeons pecking on the roof because there is a lot of food.
I wish they will stop pecking because it is so hard to work. There were also four chimneys which made it really useful because it rained a lot in that area.
I like the way you have used good compound sentences because it made it more interesting.
I like your writing ✍️ Jackson 😺
Nice work, I really like your imagination.
The creativity that you used was very good.
Wow Jackson, I’m surprised how good you are at writing. Keep it up!
Well done Jackson. I like your writing. Looking forward to seeing more interesting pieces from you.
Impressive Jackson, love how you paint the picture with words from different aspects, with things that are stationery, as well as in motion. You have also put your “thoughts” and reasoning in it, too! Great work!
Very good observation and I like your story. Great work Jackson !
Well done Jackson. Keep up the good work.