I like the house. I can see some people outside the house. I canโt see any bathroom. I can see someone walking in the dining room. The rooftop is red.
I like the house. I can see some people outside the house. I canโt see any bathroom. I can see someone walking in the dining room. The rooftop is red.
I like your interesting writing
Hellow Emma, you know my name is Emma too! I liked how you used amazing description on the roof.
I love how you described the colour of the roof.maybe add a full stop in the last sentence . Great job ๐๐พ
Hi Emma, Your writing is very good. I like how you said you could see someone going into the dining room. Good job