The children were playing very loudly and they were playing with their very cute puppy.
The cat was sleeping very very quietly.
The dad was pushing the wheelbarrow and his child.
The doves were playing together.
The trees were going side to side.
I like your writing ✍️ but i think you should make your writing ✍️ a bit longer.
Dear Alicia, I learned a lot about the house. You could put a bit more information next time. It was still really amazing