I think this is a picture of England. Its almost winter and the people there live near a lake. The big house is a hotel. I think it’s about 3pm-5pm and lots of people are on boats going on vacation.There’s a bar near the hotel where a lot of people are also going there.
I thought it was an interesting detail to include “It’s almost winter” in your story. It made me imagine that the leaves are changing to autumn colours and the weather is starting to get cooler. Maybe that’s why lots of people wanted to go out on the lake – they must want to enjoy the good weather before it gets too cold for such fun outdoor activities.
I wonder what they will do to keep busy in the winter…
You have some great ideas and have observed a lot from one picture. Perhaps next time, you could include some more specific actions to draw the reader’s interest even more. Good work with your editing.
I was interested to see you took notice of the autumn colours beginning to show in some of the trees. You look for detail. I will look forward to reading your writing as you include great detail in your sentences.
Great observations, Tony. Consider weaving them into a story starter that makes the reader want to know what’s going to happen next.