As the milkman drove down falcon inn he saw the post man and asks “hey do you have any mail for me”. “Why yes I do have some mail” “Are there you are can i have my milk”but then he drops the milk.”no”! You silly milk man said the cook now I cannot make my food.”ok I’ll drive back and get some.
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I love how you have turned your little story into a conversation between the characters. It brings the characters alive.
You have done a good job trying to use speech marks too. A good way to make it easier to read a conversation is to use a new line for each new speaker. Have a look at some of the books you read that have conversations. Do real authors do this too? How do they tell the readers which character is speaking?
You have left me wondering why the milkman is looking for mail. Perhaps he is expecting something important. You have tried hard with your speech marks and your spelling is awesome. Well done.
I like it when the characters go into a convesation.
I like how you used conversation between the different characters. It was interesting and I wish I could have read more!