The lady is the owner of the cafe.
She is happy that the milk man has arrived because she needs the milk to make coffee for her customers.
Next the postman came and delivered mail to the lady.
She wasn’t busy at all but it will get busy at noon.
The lady was looking forward to another wonderful day serving her customers.
What a wonderful piece of writing for your first go at the 5SC!
I am pleased that you managed to organise your thoughts into exactly five sentences, and I like that your ideas flow together nicely.
You have put great effort into editing your work. Good spelling and punctuation makes your writing easier for your readers to enjoy.
I really liked the way that you hinted towards the action that might occur later in the day in your final sentences. It left me wanting to know what would happen next.
Keep up the good work.
Fantastic writing and great editing too. You have used some thoughtful verbs – arrived, delivered, serving which helps make your writing interesting to read. I look forward to reading more of your writing in the future.
From Sculthorpe Primary Academy, England
We really liked your fantastic writing. Your descriptions were great. We liked that you mentioned all the people in the picture. We liked it because your main character was the lady and that you wrote with no mistakes.
We wonder who will be arriving at noon.
I liked how you used interesting words like wonderful and busy.