Once there were some people going fishing and there was Jo, dad and Andy. They caught 30 fish and 6 sharks. On the way back home they heard people crying for help because they saw bright hot flames coming from the shore. Luckily, they had buckets of water to put out the fire. They were so excited to get to shore .
You have included so much information in a few short sentences. I can see that you have a lot of ideas you would like to share.
I really like the way you described the fire using the words “bright hot flames”. It painted a picture in my mind of what was happening.
I hope there wasn’t too much damage from the fire. Certainly sounds like it was a big one!